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==Muutosehdotukset==
===Preamble, 1 §===
* "When a government does not represent the people, but a certain subclass, that is not democracy, that is aristocracy. When a government does not listen to facts, but listens to beliefs, that is not democracy, that is theocracy. When a government does not listen to the people, or to the rule of law, that is not democracy, that is dictatorship. We believe that democracy is the ideal, and it is to this end that we do aspire and work. "
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====Korjausehdotus====
# -# "When a government..., that is theocracy." removed
===Preamble, 2 §===
* "When corruption and ignorance run through the streets of our cities, having left common sense and forethought for dead, we must act, or be trampled."
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===About Civil Rights and Liberties, § 1===
* "For understanding the context the two last points we can say that ... opinion or any other personal or social condition or circumstance."
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# "For understanding the context...." Should be removed? That's just usual political correctness, doesn't really say anything or add anything to the manifesto.
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===About Restrictions of Ideas and Information : About Author's Rights===
* Today, the balance is biased, but not towards authors, but towards publishers who have alienated author's rights, and the bias grows without control and with the connivence of authorities; balance has to be reinstated, not only to restore citizens their rights regarding culture, but to also restore authors theirs preventing them to be alienated anymore.
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# "Today the balance is biased ...who have alianted author's rights" <- The fact is, copyright is also biased towards authors
# "but to also restore authors..." <- Dubious. Should be clarified, or the meaning of the statement may not be clear to everyone. E.g. how authors are alienated because of copyright?
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==Ensimmäinen vedos==
